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Lol I can relate. I trained to get my high school record for pushups and just beat it by 1 single pushup (though it wasn't close to 100 :P). Great animation anyway. definetly like the sketchy style and fluid movement it brings.

Short and too the point. Gr8 job there.

Fantastic as always Harry. Especially glad you made an animation to inspire more beginning animators.

Nice frame by frame there with silver at the end. You should definetly experiment with that stuff more in you future animations. What use for the govenment? "No Use!" lol.

Favorite of all the TOME shorts. I also like how well written rockoon is in this short. When he first debuted in the first episode, I found him somewhat generic and annoying and wasn't looking forward to other appearances of the character. after episode 4, I found his writing a lot stronger with his voice changing and quirkiness and it's put to excellent use here and Kudos to Devon Mack. Having the character having fun doing what he's doing is very enjoyable to watch and I look forward to moments like these in the tournament episodes. I also liked how the episode ends with the skater character with it being someone we know. One small thing I got a kick out of was when Rockoon acknowledged that characters have been jumping from ledges to attack players from below, something I found that became cliche, but is made into a funny joke here.

I just hope that from the tournament episode and beyond the episode can take some time away from lavendera, or atleast the rocky caverns of lavendera, because those locations are extreamly bland and it's a setting we've seen several times and I feel at this point enough is enough. If it has to be the same canyon like area, add more detail. Gradients are good at some points and I get this is a video game setting, but mix it up to add more depth to the areas. Also, maybe the characters can have a few more talking and overworld sprites added every few episodes, just to keep their movements and not seem as redundant when talking. Heck, have the characters' overworld sprites move similarly to how their talking sprites move. In the show "Garfield and Friends" one of the characters (A cowardly duck, his name I can't remember at the moment :P) had an inner-tube with his face that would change it's facial structure according to how the duck's face changed. Also, a moment that I found a bit forced in terms of humor was when the blue morphic character just became enraged out of nowhere. I know it's a minor character, but there isn't enough development or indication to that. I'd understand if the Masked guy freaked since he's the one fighting Rockoon and being taunted at, but nothing sparks the blue character's rage.

I know I've reviewed most of the episodes, but I feel that this series has the potential to be really good. Your animations before show you have a lot of potential and TOME is no exception. I feel each episode presents some sort of obvious mistake that can be overcome and many of these issues have been improved tremendously and I'm liking this direction. I also like how many people you get involved in episodes, from voice actors on the internet, to well known VA's on show and even fans can are given opportunities to get a crack at joining into episodes.

Can't wait for the tournament!

I must say, this animation is rather "graphically appealing" X_x. Definitely digging the use of shapes for the characters and the main story. I've taken a few graphic design classes and I can definitely see the humor here!

A stand to a lemonade stand, fascinating! In a way it kind of reminds me of a Calvin and Hobbes comic where Calvin tried to have his neighbor, Suzie, buy overpriced lemonade which was really pond water with a lemon thrown in it. Definitely like the use of characters as shapes and the conversation was quite funny too.

Brewster responds:

Thanks man

Truly epic. Like the variety of stuff that's happening here.

No power rangers fan, but definitely some solid animation there! Movement and action are natural and detailed. Probably for future animations like this, you should switch to an HD size like 1920x1080pi for the flash animation stage.

Definitely some solid animation there and decent audio too. My only complaint would be the length though you do acknowledge in the description, though I still recommend waiting a little longer for free time to make the animation longer. Though If you still want to come out with work quicker, you could make news updates about planned animations or submit other work to newgrounds like artwork or audio to tie viewers over for the next video.

BoomBuster responds:

yes although it was a long spending time to do this, but this wasn't the only one that took too long, it was my computer that took it too long to get this finished

Cartoons are da' bomb :)

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