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Liked the bounce of the lines. Also, it's best to keep videos no shorter than this. The last video you made was a bit too short to get the joke across. This one on the other hand had an appropriate length and good timing overall.

Neat vid. had some funny moments and nice action (like the parts where rainbowdash and sonic would have speed boosts). I would recommend that if you made another sonic vs rainbowdash vid or something similar to that, there should be more movement of stop motion. like the sequence where sonic is jumping between mountains seems somewhat static and when sonic curled into a ball, there should be more shading. and a slight nit pick is that rainbow dash didn't have the rainbow stream following from her very often as she flew, but that's just an aesthetic nitpick. the character interactions were humorous and some action sequences had a consistent pace (also it seems your drawing/model of sonic is in slightly better proportion (even head, pupils) just a small thing)

Does it's job as a roast...that is all... was every character voiced by kirb?

NIce touch to the series. Even though the series is suppost to have intentionally lacking animation, there always seems to be small improvements per episode. like to additions of the hands. The only criticism was that some of the humor was a bit difficult to understand though. Never the less, now we know that pokemon bwai will have a bright future before and after 2015 in any form or way,.. anyway
good job

My thoughts on the episode-

Animation- like the first 2 episodes it does its job, though in this episode it does a lot more and with superb results. having the characters move much more often in their speech boxes and non text box moments have improved too and seem to occur much more frequently.

Story-moving in the right direction too. it is gaining momentum at the proper pace in terms of suspense and gives the view better insight on what is to come next. it also gives better reasoning to the hacker's plot such as what else they can do game breaking (i.e. battles without a battle field).

Humor-still somewhat underwelming but still improving. nyloke's phrases have gotten better and the addition of his admirer and rival looks promising in creating irony to his persona for future episodes. don't get too hung up on this fact because tome works as a series for a serious story and animation, not as much the humor (though it would be greatly appreciated)

Characters-The new characters are likable and do there job in the story in supporting and advancing the characters development. though one thing that I found odd is that while the characters are virtual players, as noted numerous times during the episode with added references, they interact with each other as if they were actually there which seems somewhat out of place considering the fact we don't know if they ever interact with each other when they are away from the computer. explaining their existence better in tome as it relates to the real world would be a nice addition to future episodes. the only character that seemed out of place was the demon character. his transition seemed a tad bit too fast though there is enough background info to support why he made that choice (his care for beauty, justified reasoning to fight as a hacker)

The series is definitely going in the right direction. one additional note for the next episode is having the sprite battles quicker and much more action packed. quicker as in the characters move quicker and an example of the action packed element is more dynamic sound effects, some shockwaves and debris.

Best of luck to episode 4. a series worth the anticipation.

Definitely strong development from the first ep

Must say that this episode was easier to follow than the last episode. Humor wise, it is not too effective, but does its job to keep the mood balanced. Plot wise, it is consistent and unique. I must admit that this episode did give out a good point about the "silent and mysterious" characters which is that we can be annoyed with the vague history, character trait's and there purpose. Even more effective, this was presented soon (never expected Gamecrazed to get such strong development so soon which the stereotypical character of his just mentioned).

Other notable things I like to note are the ascetics. The animation does it's job at looking like a game though the fights should use some more speed (kind of like dbz) some more flowing actions, and less pausing during the fights. a lot of sprite animated videos tend to have an advantage at making that action occur so take advantage of that idea too.

Also the guest stars were nice additions in the episode. Just one thing I noticed, Masako X's character actually looks a bit like him (the glasses, red hair, brit accent (though that was intentional))

Overall, keep the humor quality balanced and not too inconvenient, keep the fights flowing and keep on the same path with your unique plot build up. This plot can go in many directions in terms of greatness. Keep it up!

Cartoons are da' bomb :)

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