ElectroJoe's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Napoleon Parnamite]

Definitely some solid animation there and decent audio too. My only complaint would be the length though you do acknowledge in the description, though I still recommend waiting a little longer for free time to make the animation longer. Though If you still want to come out with work quicker, you could make news updates about planned animations or submit other work to newgrounds like artwork or audio to tie viewers over for the next video.

BoomBuster responds:

yes although it was a long spending time to do this, but this wasn't the only one that took too long, it was my computer that took it too long to get this finished

[Ultimate Eggman]

That's all Eggman needed to do to defeat the hedgehog 0o0. Fantastic animation there. Like the sketchy and bouncy effect the animation gives off.

[Silence in the Study Hall]

Like the sketchy style of this animation

RPGsrok responds:

Thanks man! It evolved out of pure rush to finish (literally rendered 30 seconds before they started presenting) but I'm glad you like how it turned out.

[Sketch]

Fascinating angles in this animation!

[TOME Episode 07]

Definetly like this episode. Strong emotion and satisfying end.

I feel that out of the recent three episodes you showed, this is the one with the most prominent flaws, particularly with how flame girl calms alpha down. She clearly is new to the power that alpha has, yet she doesn't question how she's able to calm him down. She does have the purple flames but these powers are new to her. Isn't she concerned she can do something that she never could do before? I can understand that the power has a reason to be there because as you stated in a commentary Ravenfreak inserted some sort of program in her hair, but that connection isn't made clearly enough. Maybe in a future episode show stacy...I mean Flamegirl concerned over her new powers.

I did like how the episode ended, definitely one of the strongest spectacles of the series so far. Alpha and Flamegirl don't announce their in love, they announce they're partners for the tournament and they've become closer as friends, it's much more natural that way bringing two characters together. I also like how Kirbopher accepts that Alpha has partnered up with someone else instead of him, and then shows his grumpy face when he has to partner with Archy. Showing the human side to these characters is definitely one of the highlights of the series so far.

One issue I feel I have with the series overall is the introduction of Alpha. I understand he's a shy personality and is unsure what to do about his power, but I feel we need a little more background on his psychy, just how shy and kind is alpha and maybe a little background on his first interaction with TOME. the first episode just keeps jumping to different characters and I feel because of that, his character wasn't established well. Maybe an episode focusing on a flashback would help characterize and develop him.

Can't wait for the next ep! Let the tournament begin!!!

[Game Grumps Naruto]

Man that looks like it was hard to make. having to animate the ground and the characters constantly moving, but with fantastic and beautiful payoff! Amazing job!

[Sonic Vs. The Needle]

0o0.............. good night every body!

[DR. BEES]

Actually had a dream recently where my parents wouldn't let a bee out of their car no matter how loudly I yelled. This has helped me remember, but laugh even more at that dream.

[Smell you later Krillin]

Not bad there. You've got a good artstyle down, though I would have had the dragon move a little more in the beginning. The stroy is good, but it felt kind of slow and needs a touch more energy in it. Good job though.

[Sonic Drowns?]

Digging the pixelated characters there lol.